英语 写作课 PPT

Read your letter, and keep these questions in your mind. Make necessary changes on your draft. 3. Have you described your
1. Is it an informal letter to Focus on your friend?
Do you like your teachers there? Please don’t forget to tell me something about your new school life, OK? I just can’t wait to get your letter. Yours, The date is beneath the Tony address.
How to write an informal letter?
• The language is casual and clear.
Read the following sentence structures used in an informal letter. Put the corresponding letter A, B or C before each of them. A. at the beginning of a letter B. at the end of a letter C. either A __Sorry, I haven’t written for such a long time, but… B __I hope you’re doing well and… C __P.S. I’ve en closed some photos of… A __I really miss you. __Write soon! B __How are things with you? C __I’m just writing because… A __I can’t wait to see you in… B
Objectives • Instructional objectives
By the end of the class, students should be able to:
a. be able to use proper words,phrases and sentences learned in this unit to write a good letter. b. be able to be familiar with the format of letters and write an informal letter in a right way. c. be able to write an essay through process approach writing.
Your new school life
• • • • • • New teacher New classmates New environment Your study Activity Your learning
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very interesting My classmates are __________ and the happy humorous study here is _________.I feel _______ to make new friends __________________ because they are warm-hearted ______________. I do enjoy my new school life. What’s more …
A lot of homework, sing beautiful songs…
stage3 pre-writing
My Favourite Teacher
Key words: Choose one word from each box(these
words should show your teacher's character.)
Educational objectives
a. be able to express cares about others. b. be able to develope good relationship with teachers. c. be able to get adopted to new school life. d. be able to use revising checklist to correct essay. e. be able to learn by cooperating with others.
1. 2. 3. 4. Time: Within 10 minutes. In about 120 words. Pay attention to the layout(格式). Use the following words and expressions as many as you can.
admire devotion sense of humor be impressed by be patient with be crazy about act out
Unit 1 Writing an Informal Letter
第五组：李思航、杨泽虹、李莲茹、 陈 佳、陈 洁、张晓斌
Lesson Plan Presentation
Analysis of students: School: Senior high, Grade 2 Size: 50(中等生) Analysis of materials: 重大版教材 高一上 Unit 1 Writing
Now it is time for you to write your letter!
post-writing
Self-editing
new school life? 4. Have you described your Focus on favorite teacher with the the three adjectives? 5. Have you used any new content words in this unit? 6. Are all your sentences clear and easy to understand?
Stage2 Revision
Try to fill the chart according to your own understanding of the reading. And then…
Mr. Mills Appearance Personal quality Professional quality others
Difficult points
a. be able to write an informal letter b. be able to edit the essay to make it a good one.
Stage1 Getting students for learning
Tony’s new school life
What to write?
1. 2. 3. 4. Your apology for not writing back sooner. Your new school life. Your new teacher(s). Your eagerness to hear form him.
Requirements:
Teaching method:
I will adopt communicative teaching approach in this lesson. I will use computer, projector, and recorder as my teaching aids.
Theoretical basis:
Original part:
formal +
in
informal
‘Dear+ name +’, is used to address the receiver.
The address is at the top right-hand corner.
Sept.22,2009
Dear Robbie, It’s been a long time since we left our junior middle school. How is everything going? content…
Personal objectives
a. be able to use instructional words correctly and clearly to guide students. b. introduce the process approach writing and practice it.
An example
pretty warm-hearted devotion
Our English teacher is a pretty lady who always wears a smiling face. Also, she is warm-hearted. Every time, when we are in trouble she encourages and helps us. Moreover, I'm impressed by her devotion to teaching and us. In class, she acts out what she wants to teach us by all ways, such as her changing voice, gestures. After class, she always communicates with us so that she can know more about us and help us in study and life.
I will adopt process approach in writing teaching.
Focal points
be able to familiar with the format of letters and write an informal letter in a right way.
Topic sentence: Use the words you choose to write a
topic sentence.
Examples: Use some examples to support your ideas.
In your writing, you should use some conjunctions to make your essay fluent and smooth.
Kind, sense of humor… Prepare his lessons well, act out what he wants to teach, use a lot aids… Musical tone…
Your favorite teacher
Good-looking, handsome… Patient, kind , generous, sense of humor… Make the class interesting, care about our studying…
the layout
2. Is the layout correct?
7. Are there any mistakes in Focus on grammar, spelling, the capital letters or punctuations? language (You may use the revising checklist.)