高三英语写作教学-新闻评论概要写作(公开课)(课堂PPT)

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no more such tragedies
Step4. Rewrite in your own words
Tip1: use words or phrases of similar meaning
Original expressions get into without paying for a ticket was shot dead cold-hearted those in the wrong
3Comments blame / cold-hearted/ wrong
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tired of forgiving
5Suggestions the park was not well prepared
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raise people's awareness / visitors to observe rules
• Steps: 1.Read for writing style 2. Read for structure 3. Read for main points 4. Rewrite in our own words
Step1. Read quickly for writing style
News commentary（新闻评论）
Summary writing
What is a summary?
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details.
How do you usually do summary writing?
People blamed the man not because they are cold-hearted, but because they are tired of forgiving rule-breakers.
Summary Writing Write a summary in groups of four. Get ready to share the summary in class.
A man who entered a zoo in Ningbo without paying was killed by a tiger which was consequently killed. Many people blamed the rule-breaker for the death of the tiger not because they are cold-blooded but because sympathy shouldn’t be abused. To avoid such tragedies, the park should take more emergency precautions and the public should raise their awareness of obeying rules.
1. Is the length proper? (40~80words) 2. Is there any sentence exactly from the article? 3. Does it include all the main points?
one possible version：
(62 words)
Summary Writing
Rules
Rewrite the article with about 60 words
Step4. Rewrite in your own words
Tip3.use proper connections
The majority of voices online blamed the dead man for the animal’s death. Some said that people become cold-hearted, which is wrong. People are just tired of forgiving those in the wrong.
1.Some said that people become cold-hearted, which is wrong.
2.The tiger’s death shows the park was not well prepared for such emergencies.
2.The park should make better preparations.
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Step3.Read carefully for main points
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Main points
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a man was killed/the tiger/get into the zoo in Ningbo/ without paying for a ticket/the tiger来自百度文库was shot dead
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Step2. Read quickly for structure
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rewrite enter without paying was killed cold-blooded rule-breakers
Step4. Rewrite in your own words
Tip2. change clauses or sentences
1.Some said this was a sign that people are becoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong.