何凯文写作强化班整理笔记精编版

何凯文写作强化班整理笔记

1、Just as an old Chinese proverb says.

正如一句古老的中国谚语所说。

2、Sample as the picture is, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.

尽管图画很简单，寓意却非常深刻。

3、Aspire to inspire until I expire.

生命不息，奋斗不止。

aspire/əˈspaɪə/ v(aspiring,aspired,aspires)有志(于)

inspire /ɪnˈspaɪə/ v(inspiring,inspired,inspires)鼓舞; 激励

expire /ɪkˈspaɪə/ v(expiring,expired,expires)到期; 失效

4、With current state of affairs being so sorry, it is high time that we took effective measures to tackle this problem.

问题如此严重，是马上采取有效措施解决这个问题的时候了。

tackle /ˈtækəl/ (tackling,tackled,tackles)处理

5、It is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.

我们必须制定并执行一些法律和政策来解决这个问题。

correspond /ˌkɒrɪˈspɒnd/v (corresponding,corresponded,corresponds)相一致; 相对应

imperative /ɪmˈpɛrətɪv/ adj至关重要的

curb and harness 解决

6、In no country other than China , it has been said , is the problem of environment more serious.

在中国，环境问题是最重要的。

7、There has been a heated discussion about this picture in newspaper.

报纸上有一张图画引起了人们广泛的关注。

8、The future has arrived, it commences now.

未来已经到来，它始于现在。

commence /kəˈmɛns/ V-T/V-I (commencing,commenced,commences)使…开始; 开始

一、作文写作方式

主题词：

1、坚持：perseverance /ˌpɜːsɪˈvɪərəns/ N-UNCOUNT坚持不懈

persistence /pəˈsɪstəns/ N-UNCOUNT坚持不懈; 执著

2、榜样：model, example, role model

3、创新：innovation, creation, the spirit of innovation, the spirit of think different……

形式

第一段：2-3个句子（30-60字）

第二段：4-9个句子（100-120字）

第三段：3-4个句子（30-60字）

语言正确，用词准确

二、第一段写作

1、第一句：图画描述句

As is shown above

Which is symbolic of

Which symbolize

Symbolizing

小结：简要描述，与主题相关

2、第二句：图画影响句，引起关注

The topic illustrated in the picture will make a heated discussion.

引起关注：

Verb：trigger/spark/arouse/stimulate/cause/prompt/promote

N：attention, imagination

Adj：much attention, abundant imagination.

In China, a nation with great population

On Weibo, a popular social media

3、第三句：图画意义句（深刻）

As deep as ocean/as profound as ocean

profound /prəˈfaʊnd/ (profounder,profoundest)ADJ深刻的; 极大的强调

The drawing truly displays a states that is worthy of our attention.

We can’t afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.

我们承受不起这幅图画所展现的问题。

三、第二段写作

1、第一句：提出论点，主题很重要

The picture tell us that nothing can be compared with（主题），when it comes to the personal growth , especially in this ever rapidly changing world.

这幅图画告诉我们没有什么比（主题）重要，尤其是在这样一个人口增长，告诉发展的世界。

The picture demonstrates that the sense of environmental preservation（环保意识）is part and parcel to the sound growth of society and its absence