图表和图画类作文

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▲18%Food & Drink ▲25%Housing ▲Other
Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 1997
▲ 22%Food & Drink ▲ 32%Housing ▲ Other
Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 2002
The Average Family Expenses
The average family income in the U.S.has increased
Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析)
( facts / reasons/results…)
Sentence structures
1.What are the reasons for this phenomenon? 2.It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. 3.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… 4.The picture indicates that we…/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that… 5.This is a ironic (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among……
图表式作文的几种形式:
一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事 物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。 二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的曲线图; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的条形图; C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。
2000
2002 60%
2004 48%
2006 42%
2008 35%
As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are… The picture shows a common phenomenon. ……
As is vividly shown in the picture, _______________________________, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education, in contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits.
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• It’s clear from the charts that as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortably and eat more.
• The average family income in the U.S. Has increased. The way the average family spends its income has also changed. • In 1997, 25%of the income was spent on housing and 18% on food and drink. 57% was used to meet all other expenses. In 2002, 32% was spent on housing, a big increase. Food and drink consumed 22%. The remaining expenses amount to 46% • It’s clear from the charts that as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortably and eat more
Example1.
角度 comparison 主旨 education inequality
• The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.
Ⅲ.谋篇 ---organization
Picture3
People lack communication.
Picture 4
People can’t afford heavy medical fees.
下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象 _______ ，请你根据对 这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇 短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决 此问题发表你的看法。
发现问题
Step1. Description step2. Analysis
分析问题
Step3. Solutions 解决问题
Organization
Step 1 Description （人称/时态）
To what degree should we describe the cartoon?
Sentence structures:
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• The average family income in the U.S. Has increased. The way the average family spends its income has also changed.
第二步������ 描述两个圆形内数据间 的变化。
审题：（格式/人称/时态/要点/篇章结构） 篇章结构： ①Para1：topic tense — do/ will do
facts : 描述抓关键； tense– 有明确过去时间状语 用过去时； 无明确年份，反映一种普遍现象或介绍情 况的 用现在时 reasons： tense---do ③ conclusion: your own opinion/suggestions tense-- do
Item
Food 65%
Clothing
Recreation Others Total
8%
3% 24% 100%
9%
5% 26% 100%
12%
7% 33% 100%
15%
8% 35% 100%
17%
10% 38% 100%
Table
表格
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
Line Graph
曲线图
表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
Writing based on cartoons
Are you familiar with this cartoon?
What abilities should we have? 1. 读图
2.解意
3. 谋篇
Ⅰ.读图：Topics of cartoons
Environmental/ Natural problems
Example
Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of… comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates worsen the problem
Social phenomenon
Topics of cartoons
Attitudes towards life
Ⅱ.解意(theme)-----to the point
注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！！！
1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle)
２. 联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme)
Bar Chart / Graph
柱形图/条形图
Pie Chart
饼状图
图表类作文(写作技巧）
1.开门见山，点明主题。 由于最近几年工业的 ，某市的空气污染状况不断 恶化。由于空气污染，很多居民患上各种各样 的疾病。 In recent years, with the rapid develpoment of industry, the air pollution is getting more and more serious. Many residents suffer from various diseases because of the air pollution.
角度 comparison 主旨 education inequality
Example2
角度 criticize 主旨
The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.
• In 1997, 25%of the income was spent on housing and 18% on food and drink. 57% was used to meet all other expenses. In 2002, 32% was spent on housing, a big increase. Food and drink consumed 22%. The remaining expenses amount to 46%.
3.归纳总结或发表评论(展望未来或提出方法
或建议)。 我认为政府应该对公民的健康负责，这是毫 无疑问的。因此应该采取有效的措施防治 空气污染。 In my view, there is no doubt that the government should be responsible for the health of citizens. So it is suggested that the goverment (should) take effective measures to fight against the air pollution.
The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who managed to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic quantities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality.
2.呈现数据，分析原因。分析数据间的主要差异及趋
势，然后描写（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时， 可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理 由
如上图所示，50%的空气污染由废气引起。原因 是车辆增多，排放出大量的汽车尾气。 The chart/table above shows that 50% of the air pollution is caused by waste gases,fort there are more cars and buses ,which give off/produce lots of them. As is shown in the chart , 50% of the air pollution is caused by waste gases. It can be seen from the chart that 50% of the air pollution is caused by waste gases.