高中英语写作公开课课件

时态问题
There was a time when I got bad grades, which make me feel sad (There was a time when I got bad grades, which made me feel sad)
语态问题
First, I think my life is not changed too much so far. (First, I think my life has not changed too much so far)
词性混用
nearly condition (recent/present/current condition) Finally, I will success (Finally, I will succeed) But now, my study is not well (but now, my study is not good)
拼写错误
I’m pleased to tell you about my self (myself)
I think doctor is a very pround work (proud)
They can write better You can write better
语言运用 My life combines with happiness and sadness (My life is combined with happiness and sadness/ My life combines happiness with sadness) It is sparing no efforts in studying can make a progress (It is sparing Hale Waihona Puke Baiduo efforts in studying that makes progress/ Sparing no efforts in studying can make progress)
固定搭配
I still be busy with my study (I’m still busy with my study) I feeling happiness everyday (I feel happy everyday) Now I’m studying hardly (Now I’m studying hard)
“By othTerhs’efayulct,awniswe mrietnecborerettcet trheir own” 它Y山ou之石ca，n可w以r攻ite玉better
单复数&可不可数问题
make a progress (make progress) informations (information) The foods in the canteen is tasty (The food in the canteen is tasty)