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36、如果我们国家的法律中只有某种 神灵， 而不是 殚精竭 虑将神 灵揉进 宪法， 总体上 来说， 法律就 会更好 。—— 马克·吐 温 37、纲纪废弃之日，便是暴政兴起之 时。— —威·皮 物特
38、若是没有公众舆论的支持，法律 是丝毫 没有力 量的。 ——菲 力普斯 39、一个判例造出另一个判例，它们 迅速累 聚，进 而变成 法律。 ——朱 尼厄斯
55、 为 中 华 之 崛起而 读书。 —不 容忽视 的。— —爱献 生
谢谢！
51、 天 下 之 事 常成 于困约 ，而败 于奢靡 。——陆 游 52、 生 命 不 等 于是呼 吸，生 命是活 动。——卢 梭
53、 伟 大 的 事 业，需 要决心 ，能力 ，组织 和责任 感。 ——易 卜 生 54、 唯 书 籍 不 朽。——乔 特
36、如果我们国家的法律中只有某种 神灵， 而不是 殚精竭 虑将神 灵揉进 宪法， 总体上 来说， 法律就 会更好 。—— 马克·吐 温 37、纲纪废弃之日，便是暴政兴起之 时。— —威·皮 物特
38、若是没有公众舆论的支持，法律 是丝毫 没有力 量的。 ——菲 力普斯 39、一个判例造出另一个判例，它们 迅速累 聚，进 而变成 法律。 ——朱 尼厄斯
55、 为 中 华 之 崛起而 读书。 —不 容忽视 的。— —爱献 生
谢谢！
51、 天 下 之 事 常成 于困约 ，而败 于奢靡 。——陆 游 52、 生 命 不 等 于是呼 吸，生 命是活 动。——卢 梭
53、 伟 大 的 事 业，需 要决心 ，能力 ，组织 和责任 感。 ——易 卜 生 54、 唯 书 籍 不 朽。——乔 特
北师大版高中英语写作公开课课课件
Module2Unit4 CommunicationWorkshop
Writing IntroduceaPlace
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Introduce a Place
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An introduction of Beijing
Beijing is the capital of China, which is also the political, economical and cultural center of China. It’s located in the north of China and covers an area of 16,000 square kilometers with a population of 20 million. Dating from Zhou dynasty, it is an ancient city with a history of over 3000 years. There is a variety of climate in Beijing and the average temperature of Beijing is about 15℃. What's more, its transportation goes everywhere.
Things to do famous all over the world. What’s more, you can also go to visit some famous
universities such as Peking University and Tsinghua University where you can admire the greatness of them. Furthermore, You can also enjoy Beijing Opera, which dates from(起源于） Qing dynasty in Beijing.
Writing IntroduceaPlace
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Introduce a Place
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An introduction of Beijing
Beijing is the capital of China, which is also the political, economical and cultural center of China. It’s located in the north of China and covers an area of 16,000 square kilometers with a population of 20 million. Dating from Zhou dynasty, it is an ancient city with a history of over 3000 years. There is a variety of climate in Beijing and the average temperature of Beijing is about 15℃. What's more, its transportation goes everywhere.
Things to do famous all over the world. What’s more, you can also go to visit some famous
universities such as Peking University and Tsinghua University where you can admire the greatness of them. Furthermore, You can also enjoy Beijing Opera, which dates from(起源于） Qing dynasty in Beijing.
公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
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species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高中英语Summary Writing公开课PPT课件
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Exposition: a type of writing to inform or explain… Argumentation: a type of writing to convince or persuade…
Read for the topic
What’s the topic of the passage?
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Exposition: a type of writing to inform or explain… Argumentation: a type of writing to convince or persuade…
Read for the topic
What’s the topic of the passage?
…argue that the colors we choose affect
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高中英语应用文写作A letter of recommendation推荐信公开课PPT课件
background +purpose
I’m Chinese, female. I was born on March 25,1983 in Zhuzhou, Hunan
province. I graduated from Hunan University last month. I enjoy working with
reasons
basis hobby advantage experience
be interested in be curious about
work as/for gain rich
like ... better/best spend time doing
enjoy doing win a prize
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
basis hobby naydvantage
places of interest in China.
reasons 3 + experience
I think I’m suited for the job. If you can let me have this chance I will try
建议信，道歉信，感谢信，
投诉信
邀请信，介绍信，推推荐荐信信，
表扬信，
A letter of recommendation
欢迎信，求职信，辞职信，
祝贺信，慰问信
A letter of recommendation
What
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高中英语概要写作Shyness公开课PPT课件
要点1: Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy
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This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
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写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
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This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
20
句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
20
句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高中英语Summary Writing公开课精品PPT课件
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➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
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It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
Concluding raph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic statement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that 递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …
What makes a good paragraph?
A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.
There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make
Topic sentence:________________
Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Our school is just like a garden.
Conclusion
Personally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above,
we may draw the conclusion that ... In summary, it is wiser ...
The paragraph
正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
on the whole, as has been stated
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
Concluding raph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic statement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that 递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …
What makes a good paragraph?
A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.
There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make
Topic sentence:________________
Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Our school is just like a garden.
Conclusion
Personally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above,
we may draw the conclusion that ... In summary, it is wiser ...
The paragraph
正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
on the whole, as has been stated