英语写作语言特点一

1. be 动词
• Nanjing’s climate is marked by intense dry hear during summer months, the origin of its reputation as one of the “five furnace of the Yangtze ”.
She spends much less time studying than before, this is quite typical of senior students. She spends much less time studying than before, which is quite typical of senior students.
• With children, jobs and household chores, they are too busy to talk love.
Children, jobs and housekeeping forced romance out
• The news that I was admitted to college immediately spread from one mouth to another mouth, and everyone in our village talked about it.
A clear river surrounds a small mountain village and winds through a deep valley, with willows and reeds along its banks.
• The frame work of mutual respect is the basis of our cultural cooperation.
Teachers play an important role in education. Their social status should improved. But in the past they seldom enjoyed it.
Teachers play such an important role in education that their social status should improved, which they seldom enjoyed.
and there had been much publicity about it in my village.
• 英语总的倾向理性思维，强调形式逻辑。 但英语也不是不注重形象性表达。
Put the cart before the horse. For some, the expense of an away-from-home college education has become so excessively great that many students now attend local schools. Even after graduation, young people find their wings clipped by skyrocketing housing costs. rubberneck bumper-to-bumper pileup
We can have our own money. Using the money we can go traveling. We can buy things we like. We needn’t take money from our parents.
We can have our own money when we want to go traveling or buy things we like, instead of taking money from our parents.
明确的，用连接词表示 明确的，
意合——汉语 汉语——句子间的逻辑关系是 汉语 句子间的逻辑关系是
隐含的，不一定用连接词。 隐含的，不一定用连接词。
Examples 1a.他不老实， 我不能信任他。 1b.I can’t trust her because she is not honest. 2a. 抓住了主要矛盾，一切问题就可以迎刃而解。 2b.Once the main contradiction is grasped, all problems can be readily solved.
In school, we work mainly with our brains. Sports must be given more attention.
In school where we work mainly with our brains, more attention must be given to sports.
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The bookstore gets books from publishers, the discount they get varies from 30 percent to 40 percent
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The bookstore gets books from publishers, which offer discounts between 30 and 40 percent. Movies on TV are frequently interrupted by commercials , this makes me dislike them. Movies on TV are frequently interrupted by commercials, much to my dislike.
Many rivers are seriously polluted. There is no fish. There is no clean water.
Many rivers are so seriously polluted that there is no fish nor clean water can be found.
英语写作语言特点 (一) 一
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形合和意合 动态动词的使用 抽象化表达 抽象名词表达
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一 形合和意合
形合和意合
形合——英语 英语——句子间的逻辑关系是 句子间的逻辑关系是 英语
动态动词的使用
动态动词的使用 • 1. be 动词 “there be”, “which is ”常被称为静态表达， 尽量避免。 • 2. make 动词 问题：中国学生的作文使用过滥 使动词：endanger, disappoint, expose, dismay, convince, involve, impress, fertilize, bewilder, group, wreck, cash
Intense Dry heat in the summer earns Nanking the reputation as one of the “five furnace of the Yangtze ”.
• There is a river before my house. It is an east-to-west river and connected with the Yangtze River. It is not very long but deep.
world.
• When we walk out of school doors, we will find our knowledge is out of date.
Graduate from college/leave school
• The use of articles become a big stone in the road of the improvement of my English.
The framework of mutual respect sustains our own cultural cooperation.
2. make 动词 • 中国学生表达“使役意义”时，习惯用 “make +宾语+补语” • 分析型语言 • 综合型语言
改写句子，尽量避免使用 改写句子，尽量避免使用make 1. The newspapers make me know what take place in the world. 2. Computers make us solve difficult math problems in a short time. 3. The news made us fell afraid. 4. The men thinks that number 8 will make him have a lot of money. 5. My performance in the first semester made my parents very happy.
an obstacle/ barrier to
受汉语具体形象影响的例子
• We are now walking, with our chins up and steps big, towards the 21th century.
We are now moving confidently and proudly
A river, not very long but deep, runs before my house and connects with the Yangtze.
• On the river banks there are many willow trees with their branches bending into water.
三 抽象化表达
• 汉语重具体形象，而英语侧重抽象化表达
四字成语里的 具体形象
一针见血，七嘴八舌，十年寒窗， 千锤百炼，大张旗鼓，心花怒放， 分道扬镳，令人发指，抛砖引玉， 坐收渔利，拖泥带水，和风细雨， 骨肉连心，苦口婆心，雷厉风行
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学生英语作文中的体现
• Nothing but education can make our country stand in the forest of the world people. (只有教育 才能使我们国家立于世界民族之林。) in the rank among the advanced countries
Many willow trees bend their branches into the river.
• In the front, it was the sharp slope of a cliff.
The front cliff sloped sharply.
• It is small mountain village surrounded by a clear river winding through a deep valley, with willows and reeds along its banks.
• With this credit card it is unnecessary to carry a lot of cash with oneself and it is very useful when he meets and emergent thing.
in emergence
受汉语具体形象影响的例子
Students don’t know how to form their own opinions. Teachers should develop their ability of thinking independently.
As students don’t know how to form their own opinions, teachers should develop their ability of thinking independently.