高考英语作文写作公开课课件

6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
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参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street
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当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway
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注意：
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1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
• Dear sarah.
Possible version
Dear Peter,
We’re so glad you’re coming to join us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us. We’ll have our picnic in the People’s Park. You know where that is , don’t you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while, you will come to a hill.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
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Yours，
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Li Hua
2009年高考全国卷II英语作文
• 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信 询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
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1. 简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；
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2. 位置：天安门广场南面；
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3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；
Li Hua
• 仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。 情景：假定你叫李红，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园 (Central Park)聚会。现请你写封信邀请Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉 她来中心公园的路线。
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• 参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会) 这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察 图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。
1. 在人民公园野餐
1. have a picnic, in People’s Park
2. 从公园正门进
2. enter park, by main gate
3. 进门后朝前走
3. walk straight
4. 到小河过桥
4. cross stream
5. 向右拐后朝前走
5. turn right
normally 大众媒体 mass media 大众媒体的具体表现形式是TV，radio, newspaper, internet
• 北京很迷人 。 • Beijing is so beautiful that many people come
here.
• Beijing is来自百度文库so beautiful that many people come here every year.
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
• Dear Mrs Brown, We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us.
• Type: • Person: • Tense: • What: • When: • Where:
enter park, by main gate
• Enter the park by the main gate. •Go through the main gate of the park.
walk straight
• Walk straight on till you come to a stream. •Walk along the road until you get to
in small woods, by the lake
• We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake.
确定提示要点的益处：
1）不丢重要信息点。
2）避免中文式英文。
3）连词成句时能够注意到时态、语态等 问题。 4）便于使用恰当的连接词。
Li Hua
一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
• Dear Mrs Brown，
• We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there，haven't you？ Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing！ Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
2种方法：（1）同义替换
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
(1）这人很变态：
BT?
X
be different from normal people
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strange/odd/peculiar （2）难民
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people, no matter young or old, men or women, come here every year from all around the world.
• 高考英语看图作文五步曲 • 一“抓”为抓主题。 • 二“列”为列要点。 • 三“变”为变要点为句子。 • 四“连”为连句成篇。 • 五“检”为文章检查。
a bridge over the stream.
cross stream
• Cross the stream. Go over the bridge.
turn right • Turn right.
to the other side of hill
• Walk round to the other side of the hill. Climb the hill.
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you can find us.
disabled to stand/walk
• 二氧化碳： carbon dioxide • 一氧化碳： carbon oxide • poisonous gases
没有不会写的，只有不会想的！
残疾人： the disabled • the people who can not move/speak/think
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（2）上义词或下义词代替
上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明 下义词是事物的具体表现形式。
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）铁锹、锄头、镐： spade, hoe, pick the tools which are used to plant trees 拐杖： stick • The tool which is used to help the
连句成篇
Dear Peter,
We’re so glad you’re coming to join us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us. We’ll have our picnic in the People’s Park. You know where that is , don’t you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while, you will come to a hill.
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt