公开课-概要写作句子改写

改结构 概要写作 Summary Writing

学习目标：

1.进一步了解句子改写的方法，积极参与练习。

2.通过学习，运用句子改写方法进行概要写作的句子改写，提升改写能力。

3.灵活选择方法，使得自己的句子改写能准确表达原句意思。

Step 1：再认识概要写作

概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。

怎样的概要才是一篇好的概要写作？试着完成下面的思维导图。

Step 2：如何改写？试一试下面的方法！

改写

Step 3：积极练习吧！

一、使用近义词或反义词

1. Smoking is bad for your health, so you'd better quit it as soon as possible.

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2. Without useful measures, this problem can't be solved.

_______________________________________________________________________________ a good summary 改单词 改词序 简单句词序变化 近\反义词替换 改词性 主从句词序变化

改语态 句式变换 固定结构 简单句变复合句

二、改词性

小技巧：be +of +名词=对应的形容词

use ____________

importance ____________

value ____________

interest ____________

benefit ____________

necessity ____________

3.A good learning environment will be very valuable to every student in our class.

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三、简单句词序变化

4. The father is very proud to have an intelligent and pretty daughter.

The intelligence and beauty of the daughter__________________________________________ 5.You can obtain a large amount of information on the Internet nowadays.

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四、主从句词序变化

6. Though the result has been published, they still don’t know the detailed information.

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五、改结构之改变语态

7. People's satisfaction is largely increased by a sense of responsibility.

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六、改结构之句式变换

8. People's opinions about the source of the novel coronavirus are very different.

_____________________________________________________________________________ 9. Children are given more praise. They will achieve more success. (when引导的状语从句)

_____________________________________________________________________________ 10. Cold and wet have nothing to do with catching colds. No one has yet found the reason. (why 引导的定语从句)

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Homework: 运用今天所学的方法改写下面的主旨句。

1.The Orkney Islands are off the northern coast of Scotland.

2.But the islands have been severely affected by rising sea levels, heavy rainfall and severe weather events in recent years.

3.Now, the sea has eaten away much of the site’s western area.

4.Climate records show that since 1970, some Orkney beaches have narrowed by an average of 40 centimeters a year due to global warming.