翻译第一讲(1)
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你能译出这里诗的声 音吗？
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊的群岛，希腊的群岛！ 那里热情的莎妩爱着歌着， 那里扬起战争与和平的艺术，—— 那里涌现了迪罗，生长着飞勃！ 永恒的盛夏仍旧照耀群岛， 但是，除了太阳外，万般都已销歇。（柳无忌）
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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什么是翻译
A good translation is one which the merit of the original work is so completely transfused into another language as to be as distinctly apprehended and as strongly felt by a native of the country to which that language belongs as it is by those who speak the language of the original work. (Tytler, 1790) 好的翻译应该能够把原作的长处完全地移注到另一种语言 中，使译入语国家的人能够清楚地领悟、强烈地感受，就 像原语国家的人所领悟和感受的一样。——泰特勒， 1790
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变异点在哪？
As I climbed in, listening to the click of my skate blades on the wood of the floor, I heard the bark of the PA system: „Penalty. Barrett of Harvard. Two minutes. Holding.‟ (Love Story)
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“Music 201? Isn‟t that a graduate course?” She nodded yes, and was not very good at masking her pride. “Renaissance polyphony.” “What‟s polyphony?” “Nothing sexual, Preppie.” (Love Story) “音乐201？那不是研究生念的吗？” 她点点头表示是，掩饰不住内心的那份得意。 “是文艺复兴时代的复调音乐。” “什么叫复调音乐？” “反正不是什么色情音乐，预科生。”
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The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊群岛啊，希腊群岛！ 从前有火热的萨福唱情歌， 从前长文治武功的花草 涌出过德罗斯，跳出过阿波罗 夏天来镀金，还长久灿烂 除了太阳，什么都落了山！（卞之琳）
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And she was catting around with you when we were last over that way.
上次我们去的时候，她不是一直缠着你吗？
上次我们去那边的时候，她不是一直像只小猫似的围着你 转吗？ 上次我们去那边的时候，她就一直猫在你身边。
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The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊群岛啊，希腊群岛！ 从前有火热的萨福唱情歌， 从前长文治武功的花草 涌出过德罗斯，跳出过阿波罗 夏天来镀金，还长久灿烂 除了太阳，什么都落了山！（卞之琳）
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音步：抑扬格四音步 韵式：ababcc
The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||.
……爬进栅栏，脚上的冰刀把木头地板踩得劈劈啪啪 直响，叮是耳边的大喇叭声音更响：“哈佛队的巴雷 特侵人犯规。罚出场两分钟。”
意译抹杀了原文的文 学性
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案例
变异点在哪？
As I climbed in, listening to the click of my skate blades on the wood of the floor, I heard the bark of the PA system: ‘Penalty. Barrett of Harvard. Two minutes. Holding.’ (Love Story) ……叮是耳边的大喇叭声音更响：“哈佛队的巴雷特 侵人犯规。罚出场两分钟。” 此处的文学性翻译应能让读者联想到： 这时我听见广播也在那里汪汪地叫开了： “哈佛队巴雷特犯规。罚出场两分钟。”
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
2翻译的标准Fra bibliotek“信、达、雅”（faithfulness , expressiveness and elegance） ——严复
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The lip of the sun curled over the horizon to blow a red glow across the island. 太阳从天边升起，小岛沐浴在一片红色的朝霞之 中。 太阳在地平线上撅起一弯唇瓣，向着小岛吹了一 口红色的光。
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The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊 || 群岛啊，希腊 || 群岛！ 从前有 || 火热的 || 萨福 || 唱情歌， 从前长文治武功的花草 涌出过德罗斯，跳出过阿波罗 夏天来镀金，还长久灿烂 除了太阳，什么都落了山！（卞之琳）
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊的群岛，希腊的群岛！ 那里热情的莎妩爱着歌着， 那里扬起战争与和平的艺术，—— 那里涌现了迪罗，生长着飞勃！ 永恒的盛夏仍旧照耀群岛， 但是，除了太阳外，万般都已销歇。（柳无忌）
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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什么是翻译
A good translation is one which the merit of the original work is so completely transfused into another language as to be as distinctly apprehended and as strongly felt by a native of the country to which that language belongs as it is by those who speak the language of the original work. (Tytler, 1790) 好的翻译应该能够把原作的长处完全地移注到另一种语言 中，使译入语国家的人能够清楚地领悟、强烈地感受，就 像原语国家的人所领悟和感受的一样。——泰特勒， 1790
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案例
变异点在哪？
As I climbed in, listening to the click of my skate blades on the wood of the floor, I heard the bark of the PA system: „Penalty. Barrett of Harvard. Two minutes. Holding.‟ (Love Story)
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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“Music 201? Isn‟t that a graduate course?” She nodded yes, and was not very good at masking her pride. “Renaissance polyphony.” “What‟s polyphony?” “Nothing sexual, Preppie.” (Love Story) “音乐201？那不是研究生念的吗？” 她点点头表示是，掩饰不住内心的那份得意。 “是文艺复兴时代的复调音乐。” “什么叫复调音乐？” “反正不是什么色情音乐，预科生。”
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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关注变异点
The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊群岛啊，希腊群岛！ 从前有火热的萨福唱情歌， 从前长文治武功的花草 涌出过德罗斯，跳出过阿波罗 夏天来镀金，还长久灿烂 除了太阳，什么都落了山！（卞之琳）
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And she was catting around with you when we were last over that way.
上次我们去的时候，她不是一直缠着你吗？
上次我们去那边的时候，她不是一直像只小猫似的围着你 转吗？ 上次我们去那边的时候，她就一直猫在你身边。
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The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊群岛啊，希腊群岛！ 从前有火热的萨福唱情歌， 从前长文治武功的花草 涌出过德罗斯，跳出过阿波罗 夏天来镀金，还长久灿烂 除了太阳，什么都落了山！（卞之琳）
关注变异点
音步：抑扬格四音步 韵式：ababcc
The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||.
……爬进栅栏，脚上的冰刀把木头地板踩得劈劈啪啪 直响，叮是耳边的大喇叭声音更响：“哈佛队的巴雷 特侵人犯规。罚出场两分钟。”
意译抹杀了原文的文 学性
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LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
案例
变异点在哪？
As I climbed in, listening to the click of my skate blades on the wood of the floor, I heard the bark of the PA system: ‘Penalty. Barrett of Harvard. Two minutes. Holding.’ (Love Story) ……叮是耳边的大喇叭声音更响：“哈佛队的巴雷特 侵人犯规。罚出场两分钟。” 此处的文学性翻译应能让读者联想到： 这时我听见广播也在那里汪汪地叫开了： “哈佛队巴雷特犯规。罚出场两分钟。”
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
2翻译的标准Fra bibliotek“信、达、雅”（faithfulness , expressiveness and elegance） ——严复
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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The lip of the sun curled over the horizon to blow a red glow across the island. 太阳从天边升起，小岛沐浴在一片红色的朝霞之 中。 太阳在地平线上撅起一弯唇瓣，向着小岛吹了一 口红色的光。
LECTURE ONE: BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF TRANSLATION
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The Isles || of Greece ||, the Isles || of Greece ||! Where burn || ing Sap || pho loved || and sung ||, Where grew || the arts || of war || and peace ||, Where De || los rose ||, and Phoe || bus sprung ||! Eter || nal sum || mer gilds || them yet ||, But all ||, except || their sun ||, is set ||. 希腊 || 群岛啊，希腊 || 群岛！ 从前有 || 火热的 || 萨福 || 唱情歌， 从前长文治武功的花草 涌出过德罗斯，跳出过阿波罗 夏天来镀金，还长久灿烂 除了太阳，什么都落了山！（卞之琳）