5-Unit 1 写作课--劝说信.ppt

to change this habit. （引出话题，表明目的）
It is well known that the computer games a very exciting
However, they can greatly influence both of your health and
studies if you spent too much time on them. First, it is bad for
There is no denying that computer games are very exciting. However, they can have a great influence on both your health and studies if you are addicted to them. First, it is harmful to your health, especially your eyes. Second, it is a waste of time because you have much more important things to do, such as reading. Third, if you don't get a good nights rest, you will feel tired the following day and won't be able to focus on your studies
It is well-known that the computer games a very exciting. However, they can greatly influence both of your health and studies if you spent too much time on them. First, it is bad for your health, especially your eyes. Second, if it takes too much time of your free time, you have no time to do something important like reading. Third, if you often stay up late, you will feel tired the following day and won't be able to do well at school. （阐述理由）
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Dear Bob,
I'm sorry to learn that you like computer games very much
and often stay up late playing them. I'm writing to persuade you
How to write a
persuasive letter?
如何写好说服性信函？
Dear Bob, I'm sorry to learn that you like computer games very much
and often stay up late playing them. I'm writing to persuade you to change this habit. （引出话题，表明目的）
假设你是李华,你的外籍朋友Jack不久前选 修了他们学校的汉语课程 ,由于感觉学习起来 困难很大,他打算放弃请你给他写一封信，劝他 坚持学习
I’m sorry to learn that you want to give up the Chinese course. I’m writing to try to persuade you to carry on with it. Here are the reasons.
So I hope you understand the bad effects of playing computer games and stop it. （总结全文，表达祝愿）
Yours,
Step 1 审题的步骤:
1. 文体 信件 2. 人称 The first person （第一人称）
The second person（第二人称）
your health especially your eyes. Second, if it takes too much time
of your free time you have no time to do something important like
reading. Third, if you often stay up late you will feel tired the
Therefore, I hope you understand the harmful effect of playing computer games and get rid of the habits. （总结全文，表达祝愿）
Yours, Li Hua
It is your turn now
Have a discussion with your teammates
following day and won't be able to do well at school. （阐述理由）
So I hope you understand the bad effects of playing computer
games and stop it. （总结全文，表达祝愿）
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Bob, I'm sorry to learn that you are so crazy about computer games
and that you often stay up late playing them I'm writing to persuade you to quit. （引出话题，表明目的）