初中英语记叙文写作课件
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人教七年级下册英语记叙文(叙事)写作(共29张PPT)
'It's none of your business,' the young man said rudely. 'This is a private conversation!'
1.where did the writer go ? 2.when did the writer go to the place? 3.what did the writer do there? 4.Did he enjoy the play? Why or Why not?
Last week, I went to the theatre. I had a very good seat. The play was very interesting. I did not enjoy it. A young man and a young woman were sitting behind me. They were talking loudly. I got very angry. I could not hear the actors. I turned round. I looked at the man and the woman angrily. They did not pay any attention. In the end, I could not bear it. I turned round again. 'I can't hear a word!' I said angrily.
叙事记叙文写作
主要特点：记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明
请以“A Visit to a Farm”为题，根据提示写一次愉快的参观． 提示：１．今天早上你和你的同学在校门口集合，一起做车 去参观了一家农场．
1.where did the writer go ? 2.when did the writer go to the place? 3.what did the writer do there? 4.Did he enjoy the play? Why or Why not?
Last week, I went to the theatre. I had a very good seat. The play was very interesting. I did not enjoy it. A young man and a young woman were sitting behind me. They were talking loudly. I got very angry. I could not hear the actors. I turned round. I looked at the man and the woman angrily. They did not pay any attention. In the end, I could not bear it. I turned round again. 'I can't hear a word!' I said angrily.
叙事记叙文写作
主要特点：记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明
请以“A Visit to a Farm”为题，根据提示写一次愉快的参观． 提示：１．今天早上你和你的同学在校门口集合，一起做车 去参观了一家农场．
中考英语作文叙事记叙文专题复习指导ppt课件
Which is better?
最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。
A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
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我认为学英语很有趣。
A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .
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“爱心”表现(examples)
1. I often help classmates with lessons. 2. I help old people cross the road on my way home. 3. I often give my seat to people in need on a bus. 4. I often help clean up the park.
中考作文指导
--记叙文(叙事篇)
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叙事记叙文写作
主要特点：
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记叙文
记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以写人、叙事 为主要内容。它可以包括历史，游记，报道，回忆，故 事，琐事等。
这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出 发，表达自己或他人的经历或感受，使读者对事情十分 明了以获得强烈感受。
A I wish you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help.
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Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
2022年中考英语作文专题(叙事记叙文)课件
鼓励+帮助表达 I always told her not to give up. I helped her to learn ... after school everyday. She was very happy when her ... became better and better.
叙述记叙文
Hale Waihona Puke Thank you for your watching
Step 1 :审题 体裁：写事类记叙文 人称：第一+第三人称 时态：一般过去时（主）+一般现在时（辅） 要点：人物、时间、内容、原因、想法
黄金分段：3段式+10句话
Step 2: 提纲 开头：人物 正文：时间、经过、原因 结尾：结果（感受）
词汇层面
名词：前用形容词，中用同位语，后用定语从句，介词短语，with短语修饰 动词：用强调词do的适当形式，副词修饰，或＋意义相近的动词 形容词：用副词修饰，或+意义相近的形容词
Step 3 正文
2. When was it? 3. What did you say or do? 4. Why did it make him/her happy?
句1：One day, my classmate met a English problem. 改1：（one of+the+最高级句型）One day, one of my classmates met a very difficult English problem. 改2：（强调句句型）It was last week that my classmate had trouble/a problem/difficulty in learning English. 改3：(原因状语从句)Last week, my classmate got herself into trouble because she was weak in Englsih.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
The beginning
三段式 The body ----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用 （总-分 支持句 连接词】 -总）
The ending
结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
Writing skills—seven steps
审清题意 誊写规范
(复述)
Key sentence1
Topic
On the Internet
Body
正文
Most students…
Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences Key sentence2
英语记叙文写作教学课件
Writing techniques
1.understanding and appreciation of good narrative essay 2.writing sequence (1)think of an event in your life which was emotionally moving.spend some time thinking about it and then make detailed notes about that moving experience.
Narration
组员：
definition
To narrate is to give an account of an event or an account of a series of events, such as …
such as …
a. b. c. d. e.
real stories imaginary stories biographies news items narrative poems
There are six aspects which should be considered by the writer.
1. Organization 2. Dialogue 3. Purpose 4. Action 5. Chronological Connectors 6. Point of View
• Although I dread riding roller coasters, I am also a person who likes to confront my fear. So I went to Six Flags with a clear purpose: to get over my fear for roller coasters. It did not work very well at the beginning. Despite the great effort of encouraging myself while waiting in line, I backed off at the last minute. There were two voices battling inside my head. One said: this isn’t making you happy, so why bother? The other argued: well, don’t you want to feel a sense of accomplishment by proving to yourself that you can handle the worst? conflict between man andnarrative essay is like a story;it has a beginning,a middle and an end. The middle is the center of interest which focuses on some conflicts.
中考英语写作专题指导-记叙文课件
审题 写前
Step 1
looked after my sister Nana
my sister Nana and I
who
what 记叙文 when
where
last week
at home
第一人称
审题 写前
Step 2
looked after my sister Nana
my sister Nana and I
to my sister._A_f_te_r_th_a_t We sang songs__to_g_e_th_e_r .
In the afternoon, I cooked noodles for her.__________
__S_h_e_s_a_id__th_e_n_o_o_dl_e_s_w_e_re__ve_r_y_d_e_licious, so I felt very happy.
a rest for about an hour. In the afternoon, we played games,
read books and watched cartoons until my parents came
back.
I was very tired but really happy, because I could look
In the afternoon, I cooked noodles for my sister. I had a rest.
In the evening, We played games and watched cartoons.
I was very tired but very happy.
添加信息 （写作技巧）
英语记叙文的写作(Unit 1写作教学)PPT课件
appeal 呼吁；恳求
appeal to the school for support
We should appeal to the school for more support.
Though there is little possibility of success, we should insist on appealing to the school for more support. L4: 虽然我们中的多数人认为成功的可能性不大，但作为有 抱负的当代学生，我们应该坚持向学校呼吁获得更多财 政上的支持。 Though most of us think there is little possibility of success, as an ambitious modern student, we should insist on appealing to the school for more financial support.
I admire the creativity, imagination and brilliant ideas which can only be found in children like Amy. And I think it’s a precious instinct that nothing can substitute for. However, nowadays, parents always force children to solve problems in the way which they think is right. It can only destroy some admiring qualities of children. So, why not give children more freedom and space ,more time for themselves to do what they like.
appeal to the school for support
We should appeal to the school for more support.
Though there is little possibility of success, we should insist on appealing to the school for more support. L4: 虽然我们中的多数人认为成功的可能性不大，但作为有 抱负的当代学生，我们应该坚持向学校呼吁获得更多财 政上的支持。 Though most of us think there is little possibility of success, as an ambitious modern student, we should insist on appealing to the school for more financial support.
I admire the creativity, imagination and brilliant ideas which can only be found in children like Amy. And I think it’s a precious instinct that nothing can substitute for. However, nowadays, parents always force children to solve problems in the way which they think is right. It can only destroy some admiring qualities of children. So, why not give children more freedom and space ,more time for themselves to do what they like.
初中英语作文—记叙文 PPT 课件
满分文展示
It was fine and sunny last
①准确使用现在分词做伴随状
Saturday,so our class decided to go to 语，一方面显示其对语法知识的
West Hill for a picnic.We went there by 娴熟运用，另一方面把一副轻松
2.常用句型
(1)There are a lot of activities at the beach.海滨有很多活动。 (2)Autumn is rich with fruit and grain.秋天是瓜果飘香的季节。 (3)In the early spring the scenery is very beautiful.初春的景色分外美 丽。
一般来说，记叙文它大致分为三类：一是 以记人为主的记叙文，即以人物为中心组织材 料，围绕这个人物可以写一件事，也可写几件 事；二是以写事为主的记叙文，即以事件为中 心组织材料，围绕中心事件可以写一个人，也 可以写几个人；三是以写景状物为主的记叙 文。
但应注意的是，在一篇记叙文中，写人、写 景、写事往往是交织在一起的，不能截然分开，但 各有侧重。
试题及满分文赏读
经典命题
上个星期六学生们去西山进行一次野餐，请参考所给词语，记叙此次活动。 go to West Hill, by bike, a short rest , after, the foot of, sing, dance, climb,see,hear,happy 要求：1.条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整；2.不少于70词
(4)Last week I am so busy with homework that now I was delighed to be having an outing. 上周我忙于做作业，以至于现在我很高兴出去 游玩一次。
初中英语记叙文写作课件
• 爱好
• (When she is free,) She likes…(doing/ to do) • Her hobby is…(doing) • She is good at…(doing), she always …
• 难忘之处
• help • strict
外貌
• • • • • • • • She is a pretty woman with long straight hair. She is short and a little bit heavy. She has short curly hair. She is of medium build/height. She looks young/old. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He has blond hair. He is short/ tall/fat/thin.)
家庭生活作文题材
第一类:（以下题材应以记叙为主） • My mother(father)（写人） • My flat(neighbourhood)（写地方） • My favourite present(写物） • A birthday party/ A trip to…(写事情） 第二类:（以下题材应夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受） • My family life • My thanks to my mother(my father) 第三类（以下题材应以议论为主） • How to spend pocket money • The importance of breakfast • The advantages of doing housework
借助图画标题等形式借助图画标题等形式确贴近学生生活符合学生的年龄特点确贴近学生生活符合学生的年龄特点具有教育意义具有教育意义具有教育意义
人教版九年级英语unit8写作教程课件
He is a singer and actor, he is well-known.
Whose dog is this?
It might/ could be____.
He is a singer and actor, he is well-known.
Whose dog is this?
It might/ could be____. It must be Liu Dehua’s.
They think it _______m__igbhte the wind.
She guesses it ______c_a_n_’bte a dog.
She said that maybe it was a bear or a wolf.
Look at the chart and write sentences for the things below.
要以行动去表达。 (3). If a fellow isn’t thankful for what he’s got, he isn’t likely to be thankful for what he’s going to get. 如果一个人不为所拥有的感恩，他不可能会为自己将来所拥有的
感恩。
（2）.写事记叙文
交代事件 (起因)
…somebody has cleaned our classroom… We are discussing about…
作出推断 （经过）
Some students think it might be … I think it must be… because …
要点1: 起因（2分）
内容 要点2: 推断（2分） （8分）
英语记叙文的写作的结构ppt课件
2)并说明你参加的理由
3)以及在活动中你都做了什么,
4)同时谈谈你对课外活动的看法.
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There are many after-class activities
in our school, such as running, playing
tennis,playing basketball and so on. I
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每个人都需要朋友。你的朋友叫什么？ 来自哪里？你们是怎样认识的？谈谈 你们之间的友谊以及你的看法。
everyone, friend ,come from, get to know, be sure.
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Everyone needs friends. But different people have different ways to make friends.
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英语记叙文的写作的结构
• Beginning Topic sentence 主题句
Middle Supporting sentence 支持句 (举例说明、分层描写、解释原 因等)
Ending Conclusion 结论句
.
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写作基本要求． １．仔细研读汉语及英文提示词，千万不要漏项． ２．列出可能用到的句型，注意关联词的使用，如： and, but, so, although, because等． ３．语法方面：时态，人称的准确使用． ４．形成整个文段，想好“开头，中间，结尾”（发 表议论，谈感受）． ５．可以适当分段． ６．写完后要通读检查．
found the Great Wall looked like a huge
dragon on the mountains. It took us
3)以及在活动中你都做了什么,
4)同时谈谈你对课外活动的看法.
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There are many after-class activities
in our school, such as running, playing
tennis,playing basketball and so on. I
.
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每个人都需要朋友。你的朋友叫什么？ 来自哪里？你们是怎样认识的？谈谈 你们之间的友谊以及你的看法。
everyone, friend ,come from, get to know, be sure.
.
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Everyone needs friends. But different people have different ways to make friends.
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英语记叙文的写作的结构
• Beginning Topic sentence 主题句
Middle Supporting sentence 支持句 (举例说明、分层描写、解释原 因等)
Ending Conclusion 结论句
.
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写作基本要求． １．仔细研读汉语及英文提示词，千万不要漏项． ２．列出可能用到的句型，注意关联词的使用，如： and, but, so, although, because等． ３．语法方面：时态，人称的准确使用． ４．形成整个文段，想好“开头，中间，结尾”（发 表议论，谈感受）． ５．可以适当分段． ６．写完后要通读检查．
found the Great Wall looked like a huge
dragon on the mountains. It took us
中考英语书面表达之写人记叙文课件
写人记叙文
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1 写作指导 2 真题再现 3 题目分析（审题+构思） 4 素材积累（词汇+短语+句型） 5 范文赏析（全文背诵） 6 真题训练
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写作指导
1.写人要写“魂” 写人记叙文是通过对人物思想性格的刻
画来表现中心思想的。 2.写作角度要新、小、集中、典型。
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真题再现 假设Lucy是你的好朋友，下面是Lucy的个人信息，请你根 据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词 左右的短文。 注意：内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不 必逐条翻译。
10.此外
besides / what’s more
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➢ 句型练习
1. 我有一个好朋友，名叫 Lucy.
I have a good friend __n_a_m__ed__/c_a_l_le_d__L_u_c_y__. 2. 她是一名14岁的女孩，来自美国。
She is _a__f_o_u_r_te_e_n_-_y_e_a_r_-o_l_d_g_i_r_l_ from America. 3. 她个子高，很漂亮，金发碧眼。
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要点提示：
Name
Lucy
Age
14
Country America
Appearance good-looking, tall, blue eyes, golden hair
Character kind, outgoing, helpful
Hobbies reading, listening to music, doing sports
5. 喜欢做……
like/enjoy doing sth.
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1 写作指导 2 真题再现 3 题目分析（审题+构思） 4 素材积累（词汇+短语+句型） 5 范文赏析（全文背诵） 6 真题训练
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写作指导
1.写人要写“魂” 写人记叙文是通过对人物思想性格的刻
画来表现中心思想的。 2.写作角度要新、小、集中、典型。
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真题再现 假设Lucy是你的好朋友，下面是Lucy的个人信息，请你根 据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词 左右的短文。 注意：内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不 必逐条翻译。
10.此外
besides / what’s more
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➢ 句型练习
1. 我有一个好朋友，名叫 Lucy.
I have a good friend __n_a_m__ed__/c_a_l_le_d__L_u_c_y__. 2. 她是一名14岁的女孩，来自美国。
She is _a__f_o_u_r_te_e_n_-_y_e_a_r_-o_l_d_g_i_r_l_ from America. 3. 她个子高，很漂亮，金发碧眼。
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要点提示：
Name
Lucy
Age
14
Country America
Appearance good-looking, tall, blue eyes, golden hair
Character kind, outgoing, helpful
Hobbies reading, listening to music, doing sports
5. 喜欢做……
like/enjoy doing sth.
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七年级英语下册写作教程：Unit-12-My-busy-weekend-(共44张)PPT课件
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(1)Chunks（词块）
介词词块： ①at the Natural History Museum, ②on the first night, ③under the moon, ④in order to
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Quiz: Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering.
today! 今日事今日毕。
(2) Every day is a new beginning. 每一天都是新的开始。
(3) One day’s plan stars with the morning. 一日之计在于晨。
(4) Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于言辞。
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Task4
Talk about your last weekend with
y_o_u__r _p_a_r_tn_e_r_.___________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________
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2. Extensive languages（拓展性语言）
Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、谚语、警句与经典 例句）
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中考英语作文话题2生活叙事PPT优秀课件
4.听到这个
hearing this
9.使某人羞愧
make sb ashamed
5.做完某事
after doing sth
10.下定决心做某事 make up one’s mind to do sth
11.情不自禁做某事couldn’t / can’t help doing st1h2.如此……以至于…… so/such……that……
五要素
Ending part : 收获(启示）
3.行文 4.检查
四、素材积累
必备词汇：
1.给……深刻印象 impress sb震惊的
shocked
4.鼓励
encourage
5.令人愉快的 pleasant
6. 进步 7.惭愧的 8.旅行 9.感激的 10.相反
progress ashamed trip/tour/travel/journey thankful/grateful instead
3. 刚一到机场，飞机就起飞了。 ___O_n__a_r_ri_v_in_g__a_t_t_h_e_a_i_r_p_o_rt_____, the plane took off..
4. 听到这话，她情不自禁的哭了。 _H__e_a_r_in_g__t_h_is_,_ she couldn’t help crying.
要求：1.语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯； 2.词数80 字左右。
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学生作文失分原因分析
-----内容： 1）偏题甚至离题如: Friend—My friend My family life—My family
2）素材(例子)问题
A: 没有典型性,不切合题目 B: 缺乏说服力,难以支持个人 的观点 3) 意思重复、文章思路混乱缺 乏层次感
• 语法----1）名词的单复数前后不统一 Exams are necessary because it helps improve ourselves in many ways. 2）时态、语态、主谓不一致 Having family teachers are very common among students. 3）副词位置或选用不当 We also can do something for our parents to show our thanks .
学校生活作文题材
• • • • • • • • • • • • • 第一类: My teacher(friend, classmate) My school 第二类: My hobby/My My dream/My school life 第三类: My view on exams The advantages of after-school activities Homework/Sports/Reading Is it necessary to wear school uniforms My good (bad) study habits 第四类: A football match/An interesting lesson
写景状物 A：写物(A nice present) B：写景( My home town) be located in / has a history of/be famous for/ attract …/It is not surprising that…visit …/hope….
Discussion
4)表达随意,中国式英语比比皆是 There are a large number of tourists visit Shanghai every year.
5）语言表达繁琐或生硬
I’ll try my best to study hard. I want to get good marks. (建议用in order to 连接) To buy things on line makes our life more convenient.(用Shopping on line)
Endless homework lets me have little time to do things I like. ----Endless homework always keeps me too busy to do things I like. ----I have little time to do things I like because of endless homework.
• Who do you like best? • Could you please say something about him/her?
记叙文写作
一、写人
中考题展示
以“A person I will never forget” 为题，写一篇80词 左右的英语短文。
要求如下： 1.短文内容应包括 人物的外貌、性格、 爱好和使你难忘之 处。 2. 短文中不得出现 真实的校名和人名。
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• He is one of the cleaners in my school. He is ordinary, but he is the person I will never forget. • He looks really old and his skin is black. He is quiet and I heard that he liked singing very much. I remember that last year there was a big earthquake in Sichuan. Students donated money to help the poor people. He donated 500 yuan. It was a large amount of money for him, I think. But in his mind, there must be something more important. That is called love.
• 记叙文的训练包括记人、 叙事、写景状物。
记人 ( My best friend) 文章可通过介绍人物 的年龄、外貌、职业、爱 好、 学习工作等方面来展 现人物鲜明的个性。 (叙述的原则是从外到内）
叙事： ( An interesting lesson) 文章需要交代以下五个 要素，Who、When、 Where、What、How
• 爱好
• (When she is free,) She likes…(doing/ to do) • Her hobby is…(doing) • She is good at…(doing), she always …
• 难忘之处
• help • strict
外貌
• • • • • • • • She is a pretty woman with long straight hair. She is short and a little bit heavy. She has short curly hair. She is of medium build/height. She looks young/old. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He has blond hair. He is short/ tall/fat/thin.)
作主语: This is a special present. 作表语: What he wants is just this. 作宾语: Take these with you. 作定语: Have you visited those villages?
写人常用句型
• • • • • • • 外貌：She’s … (with …). She is …and… She has …. She is of…. She looks… 性格：She’s …(but she is…) She always/never…
家庭生活作文题材
第一类:（以下题材应以记叙为主） • My mother(father)（写人） • My flat(neighbourhood)（写地方） • My favourite present(写物） • A birthday party/ A trip to…(写事情） 第二类:（以下题材应夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受） • My family life • My thanks to my mother(my father) 第三类（以下题材应以议论为主） • How to spend pocket money • The importance of breakfast • The advantages of doing housework
社会热点话题
• The Olympics and I (2008 and I ) • Being a lovely Shanghainese for the World Expo in 2010 • My view on online games • Mobile phones at school • It’s easy to be green • Is a family teacher necessary • Is it necessary to have a net-pal
难忘之处
• She often helps us (to) do/with the laundry. • She is helpful. • She is ready to help others. • She is very strict with us and we are usually tired after class. However, we have learned a lot from her.
二、物主代词
形容词性 my their
名词性 mine ours theirs 作主语
your
yours
his
his
her
hers
its
its
our
1名词性物主代词跟名词一样可充当主语、表语、宾语：
Mine is a new handbag.
Hers was a small room.
作表语
That car is ours. These chairs are yours. 作宾语 Look at theirs. You may use mine.
• .
性格
• She is outgoing. • She is good-looking but she is a little bit quiet. • She is always smiling. • She never stops talking.
爱好
• She likes reading and playing chess. • Her hobby is playing the violin. • When she is free, she likes singing and dancing. • She is good at drawing. She always draws pictures on weekends.
记叙文
命题特点：
借助图画、标题等形式, 内容的设计主题明 确，贴近学生生活，符合学生的年龄特点， 具有教育意义。