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概括内容要点

Teaching aims: 结合广东省模拟试题的读写任务的具体分析,本节课讨论读写任务写作中的概括短文的内容要点的做法。

Procedures:

1.Introduction:

Rating criteria:概括部分(即文章的第一段)占5分,要求“按要求概括了全部主要信息,没有增加与原文无关的信息,没有照抄原文句子。语言结构正确,行文规范。”

好的开头是成功的一半。文章的第一段甚至第一个句子往往影响了评卷老师的主观印象。若想应试作文拿高分,第一段在很大程度上奠定了这篇文章的档次。

2. How to write summary

(1) Examine the topic

题目要求概括全文的内容要点最为常见:”请用30个词概括短文的要点”;但也有更具体的。如,2007年广东卷读写任务,要求概括父母对“我”的希望;佛山二模,要求概括作者喜欢与朋友共处的原因等等。因此,审清楚题目要求是非常重要的。

A: 注意关键词(题眼)并使用适当的英文词汇表达。

Passage 1 阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Dear Ari,

As you sleep in my arms, I?m amazed at how light you feel. I stare

at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.

I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That?s why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means “lion”.It?s our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.

Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you?d be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.

Finally your mother?s labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord(脐带) and put you in your mother?s arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.

And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion?s heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.

Love,

Daddy [写作内容]

假设你就是信中的Ari,父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁

生日,你准备以写信的方式,祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好):

1.以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望;

2.以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩,并包括如下要点:

(1)读信后的感受;

(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受;(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。

Dear Daddy,

Tonight is your 50th birthday, and I haven?t really got the chance to say all of my thanks I

want to tell you.

如上述2007广东卷,关键词是__________,因此必须要用_________________表达出来;

同理,Passage 2(佛山二模),关键词是__________________-.用

________________表达出来。

Passage 2 阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone.Others like to be with friends most of the time.Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?

I prefer to spend most of my time with friends, because friends offer excitement and new ideas,they can comfort me when something bad happens,and spending too much time by myself can be boring.

Friends can offer excitement and flesh ideas to a situation.For example,if I am shopping,a friend makes the experience more fun.We can look at things together, and explore our likes and dislikes.

Friends Can also comfort me if something bad happens.If I get bad news.and a friend is around,I do not have to feel bad by myself.A friend will try and cheer me up, and attempt to take my mind off whatever negative things happened.For example.1ast year I broke my leg and was in a cast all summer I had friends around me to cheer me up and distract me from the misfortune.

Overall.I think having friends around me is the best way for me to spend my time.【写作内容】

1.以约30个词概括作者喜欢与朋友共处的原因;

2.然后以约120个词写一篇短文,包括以下要点:

(1)你愿意独处还是与朋友共处?

(2)请简要说明原因,并以你的经历来支持你的观点。

又如,新闻报道类,__________________________________

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